This advancement of the Mary Sue test was brought to you by Josh Scorcher/ Firebrand, which was brought to him by Lightning Bliss... Call it what you'd like, but what the heck I'll hop on anyway.
Character: Codex Writer
1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [x] They are possessed by a demon. (Still working this part out.)
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [ ] They are physically strong.
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color.
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red.
8. [ ] Their eyes change color
9. [ ] They have wings.
10.[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11.[ ] They are immortal.
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
15.[ ] They are pyrokinetic/etc.
16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
17.[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (Personal Journal)
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19.[x] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. (Ties in with #2)
20.[ ] They are a healer.
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[x] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background. (*shrugs*)
23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
24.[ ] They ran away from home.
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31.[X] They have lots of friends/no friends. (A mixture of both: very few good friends but prefers to be alone)
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36.[x] They have a mental disorder. (Borderline Personification on this one- Asperger's... come to think of it, what would the Equine variant be called...)
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[x] They struggle to stay sane. (#2 + #36 = ???)
39.[ ] They are a psycho.
40.[ ] They have multiple personalities.
41.[X] They are very intelligent. (Half & Half)
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49.[ ] Some part of their body glows.
50.[ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.
67.[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly. (ties in with #36)
68.[x] They are very patient. (Modestly)
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (Jacket, Glasses)
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-
1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [x] They are an alcoholic. (For those rough days)
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [ ] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
Total 10 points
Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.
Mid-balanced Pony-sona/ OC. Not bad, not bad at all- I was actually expecting lower.